ok hi ppl how is my ep 1 to 4 huh nice ??? haha i know theres alot of grammer mistake but its ideas man ... at least i tried to write it out haha but i still prefer to draw it out tho o well enjoy =)

Chapter 2 : Advanture

ep 5 : Brother and Sister

After few days of walking along the road to Viga , Kite finally reaches The City Of Viga . And so he went in through the gate but before he could find for a place to rest , a thing had already caught his attention that is a dual fight between a guy who is strong enough to get hold of a thousands men and the other one was a girl who looks very weak in the outside but who would have thought that the fight between them ended in just 10second after the match started . And the winner was 1st thought to be that guy but it appeared that the thought was wrong as the winner was the girl who looks weak . After the fight , everyone who crowd around wented off 1 by 1 . After seeing the people to go off , Kite went up to the girl and have a conversation with her . After the conversation , Kite get to know her name as XiaoCui(2nd main char) . He also get to know that Xiao Cui family have been all killed by Urado within night as they was arcuse for speading the rumors . And all because of this , Kite and XiaoCui had decided that they will rebel against Urado after they have found the mysterious merchant as XiaoCui have also been rescuse by the mysterious merchant before . And so after all the conversation , Kite and XiaoCui have swore to become brother and sister .

THE STORY OF DARK AND XIAOCUI BEGAN HERE .......

ep 6 : First battle ( part 1 )

After the swore between Dark and XiaoCui , together they went to look for an inn so that they could stay a night before leaving Viga . After they have rent a room in the inn that they found , they put down all the things that they have been carrying for the time being . Together they went out to have their dinner as the sun was setting and night was coming .While eating half way , a man walk in with a few guard behind him . Then people that was still eating in the shop , quickly pick up their things and run out of the shop . Kite and XiaoCui too run out of the shop without knowing what was going on . After they ran out , XiaoCui ask 1 of the guy who ran out with them "who was the guy inside there and why is everyone so scare of him" and this was what the man say "He was the son of the government in Viga . His name was call Ed . As his dad was the most powerful person in the whole of Viga , no one in Viga dare to step up and opposed him . There was once a man step out and fight him , but that guy dead body was soon found by a farmer in the river . And that is the reason why no one in Viga dare to oppose him ." After knowing the story , Kite and XiaoCui both pick up their weapon as they are very angry at the way Ed was doing . They ran at full speed into the shop and what they see was everything in the shop was in a mass after the people have ran out . Ed and his few guard was all sitting in 1 table eating and drinking . Kite knew that the shop owner did not like Ed very much as he can see the shop owner kneeing down begging Ed to go away even though he knew it's impossible . After seeing this sight , Kite could not stand it anymore . He picked up his ShapeFire and waves it at 1 of the guard and killed him . After the guard was kill , Ed saw it when he was eating half way . He too pick up his weapon but not a sword but an axe not just a small one but a very huge one . Apon looking into Ed eyes , angryness can be seen .

ep 6 : First battle ( part 2 )

The battle between Ed , Xiao Cui and Kite began in a short while . The very 1st blow Ed give , cut the whole building into half in just 1 light waves , The people outside was all been stan . The waves was so strong that even the ground also shaked . That very moment was so much like an Level 3 earthquake . In order not to let Ed waves his axe again , Kite together with XiaoCui take up their sword and ran toward Ed . They continue to pick up their speed when running toward Ed . That battle took Kite and XiaoCui a total of 5hours before they beat Ed . It was night then when they finally killed Ed . The people who was there watching all seen to be very happy about it . And due to this , The inn keeper allow Kite and XiaoCui to have to free stay over the night . But the next day , as Kite and XiaoCui left the inn very early in the morning , therefore the guards from the government failed to capture Kite and XiaoCui alive . The government who was the father of Ed with the name of Edison was very angry about it . Therefore he place an order to capture Kite and XiaoCui alive and whoever capture Kite or XiaoCui will get a total of 1 thousand Gold . But because Kite and XiaoCui help the people in Viga to kill a big bullier , therefore no one have actuclly intented to help the government to capture then other then those who was under Ed .

o well this part 2 is abit short i guess anw thats all for today bye bye o ya its chapter 2 currently ..